Indo-Nepal border issue is in the air since
ages. It has been always a 'better tool' for leaders of the political parties
to ease their career in one and the other way. And now, it has been a same case
- but for good- for an issue in a novel. The treaty signed between Nepal and
India in 1950 intends for a close strategic friendship. But it is proved ever prejudiced.
Moreover, it has been a huge snag for the Nepalese residing in the borders.
Nayanraj Pandey, in his latest piece Loo
has beautifully crafted a second to none tragedies we are breathing.
A desire for the next novel written by the
same author had mounted the years back when Ullar
turned addictive. In Loo Pandey has lifted
the same characters facing the terrible poverty and societal setbacks. This is
a tale of the subalterns who are being excluded by the mainstream political force.
The more the readers flip into the pages, their fist certainly would bump up
because of the heart ridden atrocities the people are facing there.
The story is all set in Pattharpurawa village
of Nepalgunj. The village has been portrayed as a huge character in itself.
Though non-human by breathe, the village is powerful in depicting the miseries.
The atrocities of SSB faced by the innocent villagers are closer into reality.
The leaders said to be working for the people turn appalling; raping the
innocent girls and hanging the people into death. The awful characterization is
another point to be noticed. The characters narrating their own story revealing
some facets is good in itself. It helps reader know the psyche of each
character. Somewhere, the narrator character's information seems unworthy. The
reader could question, "How such a rug fellow would hold bigger
information of political diplomacy?" Moreover, different character's
narration should have to be different. How could each of them would carry identical
tone of narration, word preference and symbol use? The perfection of every good
novel rests on the style of its narration. And here the author has admitted it.
He discloses writing is not that much tough- says- "It's easy to write.
Not that much tough, for sure. For that, the characters must recite their story
honestly and the writer should write truthfully."
Likewise, the author's capacity of language
use is incredible and enticing. It holds the readers to flip the pages till the
end. Some 20 pages before the end are bitter which expose the one and the other
trauma faced by the people. The most painful and horrible situation is the
author getting Tute Pandit's letter. The readers feel exhausted when Pandit
revealed that Pattharpurawa is no longer in Nepal! The Nepali land being
captured by India finally is becoming the painful reality in these days too. The
story started from a death revelation goes on with loads of ups and downs. Most
of the characters carry equal value in the pages. Ilaiya, Radiolaal, Bajrangi, Nusrat,
Tute Pandit, Karim, Kabita, Hardei and almost all of them are better placed in
their pose. These characters never let go their characterization. They stay
ever same what they were. The metafictional confession in the end of the pages
is breathtaking. The style of acknowledgment worth a huge clap. The real life
people, used as the characters fit into the fictional reality. But, the story
slippers somewhere as if the author is hurried to expose.
The author's capacity of holding the reader
until the end is brilliant in style. There are few instances where Pandey would
have to work more. Raising his hero, Ilaiya, carefully is a master craft.
However, in the end the way hero is left seems painful. It would be better if
the writer had spent more ink for his well settlement. The images are perfectly
used as per the terai settings. No metaphors or simile goes out of terai as per
the condition. Pandey added few events and characters (like Prem Lalawa and
Draupadi) from his previous novel Ullar.
This insertion seems relevant and cool. The most dissatisfying evident in the
novel is the style of bracketed information given in non-consistent way. The exposition
of meaning through the bracketed information seems very much unusual and
disturbing. It could be well suited in narrative sentences but certainly out of
the way in some dialogues.
As a whole the novel disclosing the painful
reality of the marginalized people of border locale would add discourse in the
political arena. If the ever prejudiced issue of Indo-Nepal border would be settled
well, sharing benefit to both of the countries, this piece of fiction would be
a milestone in Nepali literature.
Book : Loo [लू ]
Author: Nayanraj Pandey
Genre: Novel
Publication: Sangri-La Books
Price: NRs. 300/-
Pages: 256
-CP Aryal
